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Cage

I stand here alone at last,
Away from the life I had,
Staring at the ruin all around,
My life now razed to the ground,
And now alone my life is done,
I wonder how exacly I won,
I am locked in a cold room lit by candle light,
nothing but pen and paper with which I write,
I had so much before,
Before my life was torn,
Love light vitality and glee,
All these things I held close in me,
Now I sit, still alone,
Dimmed from how I once shone,
I have forgotten what freedom was,
Or how to fight for a just cause,
My humanity,
Stipped so far fom me,
Alas the this is my fate,
To sit locked in hell’s cold cage…
©2007-2009 ~TempestasRex
:icontempestasrex:

Author's Comments

i am not sur eabout this one, i just wrote it a few seconds ago, but i decied to post it and see what you thought of it

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:icontwilight-1200:
I really like it, you should keep it

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Theirs to much Goddamn beauty in the world to quit...
:icontempestasrex:
ok, insomnia for the win lol

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"Ye preachers of equality, the tyrant frenzy of impotence crieth thus in you for "equality": your most secret tyrant longings disguise themselves thus in virtuous words!
:iconmorbispsyche:
yeah keep this one, i like how it is like a journal, almost like some of mine... when you have nothing else... write. It seems he is desperate to write I like it man alot. Just the feel, the flow.. u get what im saying Im sure... what I dont say you can read from my mind... mooooohahaha

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These Scars Tell Stories, Stories my heart doesnt want to remember.~Me
Its As Plain As Anyone Can See, We are Simply Meant to Be!~Jack Skellington
"It is not by wrath that one kills, but by laughter...' ~Friedrich Nietzsche
:iconemoislooove:
It is your mixture of beauty and sadness. Inside my heart I'm not sure whether to cry or marvel at the words you come up with...so I do both.

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I want to wake up kicking and screaming
I want to live like I know what I'm leaving
I want to know that my heart's still beating
It's beating... it's beating...
I'm bleeding

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:icontempestasrex:
*bow*

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"Ye preachers of equality, the tyrant frenzy of impotence crieth thus in you for "equality": your most secret tyrant longings disguise themselves thus in virtuous words!
:icontempestasrex:
yes i can read your mind... i am regretting reading your mind, but at least it said you liked my art! yeah i like this kind alot, i really must wtire more like this... like from a prisoners point of veiw before he get executed or the such

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"Ye preachers of equality, the tyrant frenzy of impotence crieth thus in you for "equality": your most secret tyrant longings disguise themselves thus in virtuous words!
:iconemoislooove:
lol

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I want to wake up kicking and screaming
I want to live like I know what I'm leaving
I want to know that my heart's still beating
It's beating... it's beating...
I'm bleeding

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:iconmorbispsyche:
very clever my friend, very clever.

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These Scars Tell Stories, Stories my heart doesnt want to remember.~Me
Its As Plain As Anyone Can See, We are Simply Meant to Be!~Jack Skellington
"It is not by wrath that one kills, but by laughter...' ~Friedrich Nietzsche
:iconpyrox666xpheebs:
Phenomenal:) :heart:

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:tribute:...The Lotus is a flower that rises from the mud...:tribute:
The deeper the mud, the more beautiful the lotus blooms.

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