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Quickly overtaking me,
Caressing me, insanity,
This is my final entry,
Before I enter my dark sleep,
Tearing, ripping, eating, me,
Laughing at it in glee,
Swiftly, quickly devour me!
Blind me to all I see,
Take away what is me,
Before I enter my dark sleep,
first I ask you to see,
I was once so carefree,
But now I am in love with thee…
©2007-2009 ~TempestasRex
:icontempestasrex:

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Can you almost feel the tempo? I like this one, but please, tell me what you think!

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:iconmeladibug:
I like the flow of this a lot. Check out the few I have if you get a chance! They are more depressing than this one tho. I like how this poem is dark in a way, but still optimistic and comforting.
:icontempestasrex:
Yeay! Thank you, and I will!

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"Ye preachers of equality, the tyrant frenzy of impotence crieth thus in you for "equality": your most secret tyrant longings disguise themselves thus in virtuous words!
:iconink-4-blood:
i can definitely feel the tempo, and it's a very good display of your talent! yay for... wierdness.

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i need a forty-five
between the eyes
and a pretty boy on the trigger...
:iconihatelife1029:
i really like this one...
it all just seems to flow evenly.
great job!
:+fav:

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I am I
and You are You
I do my thing
and You do yours,
and in the end,
if we are together,
then it is beautiful.

Valerie


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:iconemoislooove:
aha! yeas, tempo!! Love it!! eeee.
"Quickly overtaking me,Caressing me, insanity," is awesome. oh so awesome. Would you mind if I used it on "The Wall?" Of course I would give you credit. ^^

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I want to wake up kicking and screaming
I want to live like I know what I'm leaving
I want to know that my heart's still beating
It's beating... it's beating...
I'm bleeding

x__X
:icontempestasrex:
Yes of course! I would be honored! Thank you XD

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"Ye preachers of equality, the tyrant frenzy of impotence crieth thus in you for "equality": your most secret tyrant longings disguise themselves thus in virtuous words!
:icontempestasrex:
:bow: Thank you much dear!

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"Ye preachers of equality, the tyrant frenzy of impotence crieth thus in you for "equality": your most secret tyrant longings disguise themselves thus in virtuous words!
:icontempestasrex:
WIERDNESS RULES!!

lol :bow:

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"Ye preachers of equality, the tyrant frenzy of impotence crieth thus in you for "equality": your most secret tyrant longings disguise themselves thus in virtuous words!
:iconemoislooove:
You're welcome!!

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I want to wake up kicking and screaming
I want to live like I know what I'm leaving
I want to know that my heart's still beating
It's beating... it's beating...
I'm bleeding

x__X

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