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Why did you hurt me so? by ~TempestasRex:iconTempestasRex:



My life is now a swirling pit,
Crying on the ground I sit,
You hurt me so ruthlessly,
It almost seemed to bring you glee,
You cannot give back the joy you stole,
you rened me mind and soul,
I cannot breathe I cannot see,
Your malice hath rutured me,
My eyes full of tears,
Brought by crushing trust built over years,
You used to calm all my fears and woes,
But not it is you I loathe,
I scream I cry I call,
‘Why’d you hit me in the balls?’
©2007-2009 ~TempestasRex
:icontempestasrex:

Author's Comments

Lol THIS my friends is Zaneness :mwahaha: (and marriage)

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:iconpyrox666xpheebs:
Thats a very deep =P and funny poem... at the same time =P

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:tribute:...The Lotus is a flower that rises from the mud...:tribute:
The deeper the mud, the more beautiful the lotus blooms.
:icontempestasrex:
Thank you XD

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"Ye preachers of equality, the tyrant frenzy of impotence crieth thus in you for "equality": your most secret tyrant longings disguise themselves thus in virtuous words!
:iconemoislooove:
wow, so deep until the last line. lol. Zaneness it sure is, love! I love I cannot breathe I cannot see!!! XD Awesomeful!

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I want to wake up kicking and screaming
I want to live like I know what I'm leaving
I want to know that my heart's still beating
It's beating... it's beating...
I'm bleeding

x__X
:icontempestasrex:
YEAY! lol thank you :D

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"Ye preachers of equality, the tyrant frenzy of impotence crieth thus in you for "equality": your most secret tyrant longings disguise themselves thus in virtuous words!
:iconink-4-blood:
XDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD DDDDD




i'm sorry, this is fekking HILARIOUS!!!!!!




that's just perfect!



:heart:

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i need a forty-five
between the eyes
and a pretty boy on the trigger...
:icontempestasrex:
Thank you XD Just the effect i was looking for XD

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"Ye preachers of equality, the tyrant frenzy of impotence crieth thus in you for "equality": your most secret tyrant longings disguise themselves thus in virtuous words!
:iconblue-strawberry:
:lmao: :rofl:

Very good! You had me going until the last line!

Zaneness rocks:D

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You have four nostrils, just to let you know.
:iconemoislooove:
np

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I want to wake up kicking and screaming
I want to live like I know what I'm leaving
I want to know that my heart's still beating
It's beating... it's beating...
I'm bleeding

x__X
:iconink-4-blood:
lol. you're such a dork, hun. XD

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i need a forty-five
between the eyes
and a pretty boy on the trigger...

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